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[绿意盎然] 【妈妈的校园邂逅】(第三章 焦心对话)

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看了三章了,确实改了很多,里面对话程度删减,男主心里话删减,李凯的性格变得没那么沉默寡言,倒是活泼大胆了些,女主不在那么害羞 感觉对人都有点自来熟了。删减归删减不过倒是很好理解。以前没改的时候 总是会猜想 女主那么腼腆害羞 到底会是怎么个被上法,经过大大这么一改 倒是变得很好理解了!
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