路飞88 发表于 2012-2-13 12:23   全显示 1楼
由开头这几章看来又是一片不错的长篇吧！？作者更新很快，这一点值得我们给支持。同时故事是花开两朵，各占一支的故事模式，看起来有新意。同时中心也很明确，按着故事的发展作者应该是黑的会转白、白的会转黑，情节的描写也很到位，恰到好处。特别是发现奸情的那刻。还带有水的细节描写。很好！希望作者，能尽力写下去。别中间断咯哦！
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